急求修改初二英语作文
If I am teacher(1－－ am 改成 were，并加a）
If I am teacher（同上）,I do will in tcach students（2－－do will in tcach students改成will do well in teaching students）。 I work sh onlde better and better。（3－－work sh onlde 改成should work）
Make they are grade better and better too（4－－。 Make they...全部
If I am teacher(1－－ am 改成 were，并加a）
If I am teacher（同上）,I do will in tcach students（2－－do will in tcach students改成will do well in teaching students）。
I work sh onlde better and better。（3－－work sh onlde 改成should work）
Make they are grade better and better too（4－－。
Make they are grade 改成and make them grade ，并在too 前面加逗号）， Althovgh become a teacher work is very tried,（5-- become a teacher work 改成 becoming a teacher will be very tired）
but I am afraid,because this all for children in good health,study very much（6--study very much改成and study very hard，并去掉but或because），If I am teacher（同“1”）,I will be serions and do not give up everyone childrens chidren all over clever。
（7--原句改成I will be not give up everyone children , because chidren all over clever）。
原因：
1 表示虚拟语气，用过去时were表示
2 do well in 表示在某方面作的好，由于是介词in ，所以动词用ing形式
3 情态动词should放在实义动词后面
4 make sb do sth，too 表示“也”，放在句末用逗号隔开。
5 动名词作主语
6 表示学习努力用study very hard，but和beacause不能共存。
7 句意不符合语境。
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