英语改错括号中是我改的1itis
1 It is not a good idea to go shopping on sunday if the
shops are very crowded( if 改成 because)
你这题对了，一楼的改法错了，crowded是形容词，做表语。
2 Because you are a college student ，you shouldn't depend
too much on you parents (，后加so)
将you parents中的you改为your，把名词性人称代词改为形容词性
人称代词，做定语。
3 It rained a lot this summer...全部
1 It is not a good idea to go shopping on sunday if the
shops are very crowded( if 改成 because)
你这题对了，一楼的改法错了，crowded是形容词，做表语。
2 Because you are a college student ，you shouldn't depend
too much on you parents (，后加so)
将you parents中的you改为your，把名词性人称代词改为形容词性
人称代词，做定语。
3 It rained a lot this summer since we didn't have to water the flowers in the garden(这个我不会改）
将Since改为SO，表示因果关系。
4 She read the funny stories when she laughed aloud in her
bedroom(把when提到句首）
将laugued aloud 中的aloud改为loudly，将形容词改为副词，做
状语。
5 The students didn't quite understand the teacher's point ;however ,he asked him to explain it (however 改成so)
你改对了，表示因果关系，一楼改错了，为什么要改为They呢？
6 The girl was a little nervous in class ,at last the
teacher asked her to sit down(,后加so)
你改对了，一楼错了，nervous是形容词做表语，加in错了。
7 Although he was very tired ,but he tired to finish his
work on time (去but )
你又对了，although与but不能同时使用，去掉一即可。
8 As you know ,that all the students are eager to learn
english well(去，）
你错了，一楼改法也错了，这里应去掉that，as you know 表示
“根据某人所知”。
不能再用that，否则就没有主句了。
9 I’d like to know when will the american teacher come to
join in our english party（去in )
这里应将will去掉，when引导宾语从句，要用陈述语气。
join in /at 对的，表示“参加。。活动”。
10 He was in a hurry to leave and the telephone rang
(and改成 when）
这题你对了。
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