急！高一英语作文，40分题目：“
As the world is developping all the time,there is one thing that will never chang for us。It is the way we make friends。 When we make friend,fwe must put our heart to the person we want to make friends to。Only when we do this can we find a real friend。 Maybe sometimes you would say a line to your...全部
As the world is developping all the time,there is one thing that will never chang for us。It is the way we make friends。
When we make friend,fwe must put our heart to the person we want to make friends to。Only when we do this can we find a real friend。
Maybe sometimes you would say a line to your friend,but it doesn't matter。Because if he is your real friend,he will forgive you。
But sometimes we may also have some friend that is bad to us。And when we meet these person,we should keep away from them。
Well,what we must always remember in our heart is that a friend in need is a fried indeed。Only in this way can we make real friends。
实在想不出什么，就只能写成这样了。还有，顺便说一下，三楼那个初三的同学。说实话，初三能写成这样实在是很不容易了。不过好像病句也不少～第二句应该是How can we make good friends,因为how to make good friends根本不是一个完整的句子，它根本没有谓语，而动词不定式是不能作谓语的。
还有应该是in two ways,in the internet。a good way 应该要比a real way更好一些。还有一个很严重的语法问题~a little tradional that is to meet each other and to be good friends，后面的and应该去掉，因为to be good friends 是和前面的 to meet each other不是并列的~要用and的话就应该在and后面加个in this way。
最后一句~believe in后面要接宾语~
应该就这么多了，找个天使爱我，别怪我多嘴~忠言逆耳，希望你在高中后能更上一层楼！。收起
