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  at last i had bought of my mobile phone。 i like winrty colthing this year in the market wish going bought my mobile phone these day。
   i wish pass it as soon as this winrty year ,then i would buy whta i like colthing bucause that it's cheap more 终于买完了手机。这些天因为买手机我都在街上，看到今年的冬天的衣服我都挺喜欢的。
   我期盼着这个冬季快点过去这样衣服就会打折了，然后我再去买。。

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2006-12-14

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    at last i had finished buying my mobile phone。 i like winter colthing this year on the market with buying my mobile phone these day。
     i wish to pass this winter as soon as possible ,then i would buy what I like clothing bucause that it's cheaper。
   。

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诺***

2006-12-14

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    I have bought my mobile phone at last。 I visited shop after shop,when looking for a new mobile phone。
  I found the winter clothes in fashion were very nice。   I liked them very much。
   I hope the winter could leave soon ,so I would buy the clothes when they are discounted for sale。

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云***

2006-12-14

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    At last I had bought a cell phone。 I have been lingering in the street for buying a cell phone these days and always glowed with delight when I saw winter clothing in fashion。
     I wish winter to leave soon that there might be a clearance sale and then I will be a big buyer。
   。

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b***

2006-12-14

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    I bought a mobile phone at last。呵呵也FANGYU一样 I visited shops frequentely these days for buying a mobile phone。
   I like those clothes for this winter very much。
     I hope this winter will pass soon so that I can buy those clothes by a nice discount。

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f***

2006-12-14

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    I bought a mobile phone at last。 Because of buying the mobile phone,I often in the market these days, I like all the colthing in this winter 。
     I hope this winter will be finished as soon as possible ,the clothing will have some discount,then I will go shopping。

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