英文问题求解

英文问题求解谢谢这几种表达地道吗

请看欧亨利的短篇小说《麦琪的礼物》中Della卖掉自己一头秀发时原文的句子，在比较一下你的句子，从中选择更好的表达法： Suddenly she whirled from the window and stood before the glass。 her eyes were shining brilliantly, but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds。 Rapidly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length。 把头发扎起来还可以说...全部

  请看欧亨利的短篇小说《麦琪的礼物》中Della卖掉自己一头秀发时原文的句子，在比较一下你的句子，从中选择更好的表达法： Suddenly she whirled from the window and stood before the glass。
   her eyes were shining brilliantly, but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds。 Rapidly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length。
   把头发扎起来还可以说do one's hair up! 。收起