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    The Telephone It would be difficult to imagine modern life Without the telephone。 It has become an indispensable instrument of communication, saving much time and travel by enabling people to talk to one another over great distances。
     Nowadays it Is just about as easy to talk across a continent, or even overseas, as it is to talk across a continent, door neighbor。
     However, it is in emergencies that the telephone really process its usefulness。 When there is a fire, or when someone is suddenly taken ill, the first thing one thinks of is ‘Where is the nearest telephone?’ so that help can be summoned。
     The Olympic Games ——Great in 2004 wonderful in 2008 In 2004, the Olympic Games will be held in Greece, the cradle of the very first games。
     I think the Greek people will be quite delighted。 As I’m a Chinese girl from Hang Zhou city, which is called “Paradise in china”, I’d like to wish the Olympic Games 2004 be full of success and long-term friendship between people of the two countries。
     In 2008, the Olympics will be held in Beijing, China。 China actually has a long history。
   It makes feel honored。 Because it will provide an opportunity for Beijing to be known and surprise people from all over the world。
     Let’s all together contribute and wait for the coming of the splendid 2008! The Internet The Internet exerts a peculiar fascination on a great many people。
     Both the old and the youth can enjoy the civilized comforts which modern science brings to us。
   It really adds color to the dull routine of everyday life。   There is no doubt that for the youth the Internet is an important tool for study。
   Nothing can be compared with its convenient operation, high speed and varied information resources。
     As long as you click what you need, you’ll get a large number of information picked out in such a short time。
   Besides outputting the information, at the same time, yon can input your own works and send them to the Internet。
     In this way you can have more opportunities to share the tremendous spiritual excitement with the ones who have common goals。
   By comparison, the youth prefer to spend the long and friendless evenings in front of the computer—it seers to be the only form of entertainment。
     They have a variety of experiences, such as from the chat to the love online , from the network game to the network crime。
   Perhaps they have led the network cultural trend, and they are the spreader of the Internet culture。
     The old, however, sometimes imagine the Internet to be a sort of place, which is full of mystery。
   They often failed to understand how the ‘net’ works。   One thing is certain, however, they always go into raptures at the mere mention the Internet。
   They are always talking with a proud about how skilled their grandsons operate the computer and surf the Internet, or the fantastic the Internet trip they went on their own ----after that, they never forget to list the privilege of modern science one by one, and make a conclusion that how fast the science and technology developed。
     No one can avoid being influenced by modern science and technology。 Maybe we can use our intelligence to make more discoveries and create more inventions aiming at influencing more people。
     protecting Water is very important for life。 Every day we use water to drink and to wash。
   Plants need water to grow 。 People can not live without water。   Plants will die without water。
   Now the environment is getting worse and worse。 So taking care of our environment is very important。
     We must stop some people or some factories from pouring waste water into the rivers or lakes。
   We should do something useful to improve the environment。   We should plant more trees to make our city greener。
   The more trees is, the better air is。 If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment。
     The world will become much more beautiful。 science In my impression, a number of admirable values are manifest in science。
   Science, for instance, is committed to learning the truth - seriously committed to the ascertainment of verifiable truth - and this is not, as yet, a universal or even a particularly popular human attitude。
     Moreover, science from its inception has been a friend of free speech, the enemy of what the amateur scientist Thomas Jefferson called " every form of tyranny over the mind of man。
    " The scientific community today, for all its faults, remains generally open and unsecretive, international and egalitarian。
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