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Commencing last month, I have started to get some hands-on practice on using XX to produce client drawings。 I have also received some entry-level training on the software。 However, with respect to the practical know-how on XX, I feel my knowledge remains inadequate。 At this point in time, the ...全部

  Commencing last month, I have started to get some hands-on practice on using XX to produce client drawings。
   I have also received some entry-level training on the software。 However, with respect to the practical know-how on XX, I feel my knowledge remains inadequate。
   At this point in time, the head office has already been using the XX3 version。 I think the Japanese office will be upgraded to XX3 soon as well。
   On September 26 and 27, there will a training on XX available in Shanghai。 I am writing to request for your kind permission for me to attend this training in Shanghai。
   I believe that I will be able to deliver better job performance with knowledge acquired from this training。
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