GMAT作文递进式观点该怎么写?
GMAT作文递进式观点:层层展开——注意一个合理order:比如刚才那个不能说反了
Eg:"Clearly, government has a responsibility to support the arts。 However, if that support is going to produce anything of value, government must place no restrictions on the art that is produced。 "
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the ...全部
GMAT作文递进式观点:层层展开——注意一个合理order:比如刚才那个不能说反了
Eg:"Clearly, government has a responsibility to support the arts。
However, if that support is going to produce anything of value, government must place no restrictions on the art that is produced。
"
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above?
(1)破题:
1) 同意:两句话都同意。
这两句话的关系是第一句是第二句的前提。
2) 不同意:可以weaken第一句或第二句,任意,但是usually是weaken第二句,因为第一句elaborate起来相对难一些,但是想得出来也可以。
【看范文】:
总观点:不同意。
First, subsidizing the arts is neither a proper nor necessary job for government。
——这句话:weaken了前提“clearly”那句。
Second, government cannot possibly play an evenhanded role as arts patron。
——这句话:承认前提,weaken第二句。
所以,这么看下来,整个逻辑是:
首先,政府就不应该支持。
其次,即使政府应该支持,这个支持也应该是有限制性的。
【注意】:请注意这里的logical order——
如果两个分观点颠倒了顺序就不可以:因为下面那个的内容已经承认“要支持艺术了”,如果放到第一个,后面再来个“不同意支持艺术”,前后矛盾!。收起