一道英语改错题，只允许改10处短
This (The) summer holiday,When (which) I’m looking forward to,is coming。What great fun there (it) is to go fishing!Play (Playing) football is one of my hobbies,I can ride my bike,climb high mountains,or go swimming。 Sometimes I can play with (remove with) chess with my grandfather。How interested ...全部
This (The) summer holiday,When (which) I’m looking forward to,is coming。What great fun there (it) is to go fishing!Play (Playing) football is one of my hobbies,I can ride my bike,climb high mountains,or go swimming。
Sometimes I can play with (remove with) chess with my grandfather。How interested (interesting) my holiday will be!But my father is always afraid I might drop into water,fell (fall) off a tree,or be hurt by a truck or something 。
He is afraid I would fight against others or (be) taken away by bad men。But if I’m careful or polite enough ,What will (how can) these things happen?I must try (my) best to persuade my father。
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