揭秘美国本科留学ps文书写法有哪些？
揭秘美国本科留学ps文书写法有哪些？
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一、美国本科文书PS开头--重复简历型
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
点评：美国留学ps不要去重复简历中的东西，这在很多学校的PS要求中明确提到，个人陈述的写作要具体到事件上，事件解决上，而不要单纯重复已有的内容。
二、美国本科文书PS开头--学校介绍型 I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China。
点评：该同学的ps开头等于是一个申请学校的简介，这好像是在帮助学校做宣传，或表达你有多了解该学校，而不是写个人陈述了。这是没有意义的开头，白白浪费了字数，最容易被秒据掉。
三、美国本科文书PS开头--抄袭句式型 As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program。
Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new。
点评：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的，很多同学在用。 但你要知道，老外最恨抄袭，最喜原创，所以利害关系大家想想吧。
四、美国本科留学ps文书开头--救世主型 I am a problem solver。 I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that。
Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man''s endeavor, … 点评：一副救世主的形象，小时候就受富兰克林的影响，立志改变世界。
ps的写作一定要个人化具体化，别吹大牛，甚至带着一种霸权主义思维。 五、美国本科留学文书PS开头--犹抱琵琶型 Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people 。
At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action。
Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action。 Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX。
And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career。
点评：重点放在自己要做重大决定上了，人生的转折点，然后来上句所谓名言警句。浪费字数，有限的字数里，同学们应该学会直接，并且抓住重点，突出自己最有优势的方面，最有特色的方面。 。
二、美国本科文书PS开头--学校介绍型 I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China。
点评：该同学的ps开头等于是一个申请学校的简介，这好像是在帮助学校做宣传，或表达你有多了解该学校，而不是写个人陈述了。这是没有意义的开头，白白浪费了字数，最容易被秒据掉。
三、美国本科文书PS开头--抄袭句式型 As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program。
Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new。
点评：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的，很多同学在用。 但你要知道，老外最恨抄袭，最喜原创，所以利害关系大家想想吧。
四、美国本科留学ps文书开头--救世主型 I am a problem solver。 I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that。
Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man''s endeavor, … 点评：一副救世主的形象，小时候就受富兰克林的影响，立志改变世界。
ps的写作一定要个人化具体化，别吹大牛，甚至带着一种霸权主义思维。 五、美国本科留学文书PS开头--犹抱琵琶型 Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people 。
At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action。
Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action。 Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX。
And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career。
点评：重点放在自己要做重大决定上了，人生的转折点，然后来上句所谓名言警句。浪费字数，有限的字数里，同学们应该学会直接，并且抓住重点，突出自己最有优势的方面，最有特色的方面。 。
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