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Likethebasketballgirl,weshouldalwayshaveadreambeforewestart,whichwillhelpustosucceed。"Ifyoudonotknowwhereyouaregoing,eventhewindwillblowagainstyou。 "Weneedtoaimourgoals,conquerdifficultiesalongtheway,andachievesuccessintheend。Inadddition,wecanneverautomaticallybecomesuccessfuljustwithadreaminmind...全部
Likethebasketballgirl,weshouldalwayshaveadreambeforewestart,whichwillhelpustosucceed。"Ifyoudonotknowwhereyouaregoing,eventhewindwillblowagainstyou。
"Weneedtoaimourgoals,conquerdifficultiesalongtheway,andachievesuccessintheend。Inadddition,wecanneverautomaticallybecomesuccessfuljustwithadreaminmind,wemustdisciplineourselves,comeupwithgoodplans,anddevoteourselvesinmakingourdreamscometrue。
Oncewebelievethatwecandobetter,wewilltryharder,thenwewilldobetterindeed。That'sthemagneticpowerofadream。
Holdonyourdreamsandlet'sbearinmind,ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactdonotcount!Thanksyouverymuch!HereistheotherpostingthatIcouldn'tgeton。
Iamnotsayingthataslongasonehasadreamthathewillcertainlysucceedintheend。Ifirmlybelievethatwithadreaminmind,wewillbemorehopefultosucceed。
AstoryinCRAZYENGLISHillustratedadeterminedgirlwholovedbasketballsomuchthatshepracticediteveryday。
Shedribsandshootsoverandoveragain,sometimeseventilldark。Whenshewasaskedwhyshepracticedsohard,shesaid:“Iwanttogotocollege,buttheonlywayisthroughascholarship。
Ilikebasketball。Iwanttobethebestplayerincollegebasketball。Mydaddyalwayste ,thefactdonotcount。"Withsuchstrongdetermination,shekeepsonpracticingevenwhenthecoachespersuadedhertogiveupbecauseshewasnottallenough。
However,afteryears'hardworking,herdreambecametrueandshewasdraftedinthecollegebasketballteam。Shewasofferedafullscholarshipsoshecouldgotocollege。
Therefore, ,thefactdonotcount。收起
