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It's always the basic standard of the Dream Factory that the screen goes clear, characters appear exquisite and stories twist and turn touching。 What's the most important is that it shows the world as it is。 That is, there is no shortcut or cheat in the world but the only way of winning is to bel...全部
It's always the basic standard of the Dream Factory that the screen goes clear, characters appear exquisite and stories twist and turn touching。
What's the most important is that it shows the world as it is。 That is, there is no shortcut or cheat in the world but the only way of winning is to believe in yourself。
No more to speak of about the play, it's really excellent。 During the course of the performance, the audients frequently give out enjoying laughter, which makes a relaxing and easygoing atmosphere all around。
And this film has been done very authenticly without any interpretion from the western ones。Whether the stories and the details, or the processes and pictures, are all following the eatern custom with the only differenc, the modern spoken words ,such as "OK" and so on。
你的译文基本上就是汉语的罗列，没有英语的行文基础。要说改正，莫不如说翻译了。上面的内容供参考。收起
