谁能帮我看看这篇作文有什么语法错误,帮我改一下.如果有关于汶川地震的英语作文也贴一下最好带中文翻译
At 14:28 May 12th 2008,a serious earthquake hit sichuan wenchuan。 In the earthquake,thousands people were killed。 It is the largest earthquake in China since 1949。
Many people were homeless。 But they are alive。 They can rebulid their houses。 Not only the Chinese but also forgieners donated money to victims。
I hope people who live in disaster area can rebulid their houses as soon as possible and face difficult bravely。 谢啦~~~~~。
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At 14:28 May 12th 2008,a serious earthquake hit sichuan wenchuan。 2008年5月12日14点28分,四川汶川发生强烈地震。
Thousands of people were killed in the deadly earthquake。 数以千计的人在地震中伤亡。 It is the largest earthquake in China since 1949。
这是自1949年以来在中国发生最严重的地震。 Many people were homeless。许多人无家可归。 But the rest are survived in the earthquake。
但也有不少人在地震中生存了下来。 They can rebulid their houses。他们可以重建家园。 Not only the Chinese but also forgieners donated money to victims。
不仅国人而且外国友人向遇难同胞捐款。 I hope people who live in disaster area can rebulid their houses as soon as possible and face difficulty bravely。
我希望幸存者能早日重建家园勇敢面对困难。
Thousands of people were killed in the deadly earthquake。 数以千计的人在地震中伤亡。 It is the largest earthquake in China since 1949。
这是自1949年以来在中国发生最严重的地震。 Many people were homeless。许多人无家可归。 But the rest are survived in the earthquake。
但也有不少人在地震中生存了下来。 They can rebulid their houses。他们可以重建家园。 Not only the Chinese but also forgieners donated money to victims。
不仅国人而且外国友人向遇难同胞捐款。 I hope people who live in disaster area can rebulid their houses as soon as possible and face difficulty bravely。
我希望幸存者能早日重建家园勇敢面对困难。
At 14:28 May 12th, 2008，(在月份与年份中间应该加逗号）a serious earthquake hit wenchuan, which is a county of Sichuan province。
（在英文中，地址习惯上从小到大，不应该先写四川）It is the largest earthquake in China since 1949。 In the earthquake,thousands of people lost their lives。
(kill在英文中有一层被人杀害的含义，用在自然灾害上似乎就不太贴切了） Many people were homeless, fortunately they are alive。 They can rebulid their houses。
Not only the Chinese but also foreigners（拼写错了） donated money to victims。 I hope people who live in disaster area can rebulid their houses as soon as possible and face difficult bravely。
第二句和第三句的顺序帮你颠倒了一下，这样意思应该更通顺。
（在英文中，地址习惯上从小到大，不应该先写四川）It is the largest earthquake in China since 1949。 In the earthquake,thousands of people lost their lives。
(kill在英文中有一层被人杀害的含义，用在自然灾害上似乎就不太贴切了） Many people were homeless, fortunately they are alive。 They can rebulid their houses。
Not only the Chinese but also foreigners（拼写错了） donated money to victims。 I hope people who live in disaster area can rebulid their houses as soon as possible and face difficult bravely。
第二句和第三句的顺序帮你颠倒了一下，这样意思应该更通顺。
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