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erm。。。allofaboveanswersarewrong。。whyarewesternfastfoodsopopular?Wecanseeallkindsoffastfoodrestaurantsinourdailylife,f 、McDonalds、PizzaHotsandmanymore。 ThesefastfoodrestaurantsalsogiveagreatboomtotheChina'sfoodindustry。ButexactlywhatmakesfastfoodsuchapopularchoiceamongthepeopleinChinaandwhatmakest...全部
erm。。。allofaboveanswersarewrong。。whyarewesternfastfoodsopopular?Wecanseeallkindsoffastfoodrestaurantsinourdailylife,f 、McDonalds、PizzaHotsandmanymore。
ThesefastfoodrestaurantsalsogiveagreatboomtotheChina'sfoodindustry。ButexactlywhatmakesfastfoodsuchapopularchoiceamongthepeopleinChinaandwhatmakesthemchooseitoverChinesefood?TherearemanyreasonswhichcausedthisdramaticchangeinChina。
Firstofall,thiswouldbethefirsttimemanypeopleinChinaevercomeacrossfoodfromtheWest,whichmadethemcuriousandthuswillingtogiveitatry。
Secondly,mostoftheserestaurantshadamuchbetterservicethanthatofthelocalones,peoplearemuchwillingtocometoarestaurantwithagoodservice。
Lastly,ithadbecomea"fashion"totheyoungergenerationtopreferfastfoodoverchinesefood。Itwasconsidered"cool"tohavemealswithyourfriendsinafastfoodrestaurant。
Withthesefactors,thenewdemandsforfastfoodcreatenewchallengesfortheChinafoodindustry,butatthesametimeinspirationfornewideas。
Howeveritwasnotenoughwithonlytheideas,weshouldthinkofwaystoimproveandenhancethefastfoodindustryineveryaspect。
ihavegreatfaiththatthefastfoodindustrywouldgetbetterandbetterinthenearfuture。收起
