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And the Spring Festival will coming。改为And the Spring Festival is coming。And today, I go home at 10:00 a。 m。 改为And today, I went home at 10:00 a。m。 因为这件事已经过去了,所以用过去式,不过初一上册,还没学过去式,下册就会学Because I go my grandparents’ home yesterday to take some things for the Spring Festival。 改为Because I went my g...全部
And the Spring Festival will coming。改为And the Spring Festival is coming。And today, I go home at 10:00 a。
m。 改为And today, I went home at 10:00 a。m。 因为这件事已经过去了,所以用过去式,不过初一上册,还没学过去式,下册就会学Because I go my grandparents’ home yesterday to take some things for the Spring Festival。
改为Because I went my grandparents’ home yesterday to take some things for the Spring Festival。 I eat some foods from grandparents’ home for lunch。
改为I ate some foods from grandparents’ home for lunch。 My grandmother makes them for one night。 改为My grandmother made them for one night。
So, they’re very tasty and nutritional。改为So, they were very tasty and nutritional。I watch TV。改为I watched TV。
All of TV programs are about the Spring Festival改为All of TV programs were about the Spring FestivalI start to do my homework。
改为I started to do my homework。I eat super with my father at about 6:30 cause today we eat a lot of seafood。
改为I ate super with my father at about 6:30, because today we ate a lot of seafood。在这里用cause不太好I by bike go out to play这句话有语法错误,不能说I by bike应为I took a bike,而且没有go out to play的说法,只有go out for fun骑车玩就的玩可以省去,所以全句改为I took a bikeMost of the people in the whole street are in red and very happy。
改为Most of the people in the whole street were in red and very happy。
They hope the Spring Festival comes quickly改为They hoped the Spring Festival comes quicklyBecause the Spring Festival will coming改为Because the Spring Festival is coming。收起