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  After many long hours of hard-work, not only did she prove to be successful in the project, but she also established her position in the company as a quick learner and as an individual with a sound theoretical background。
   She has won appreciation from her colleagues。 前后两句是因果关系,但是感觉最后一句跟前面联系不够紧密,能否改的更顺畅一些。谢谢!。

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2011-03-17

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  With many long hours and hard work, not only has she attained success in the project, she has gained a reputation as a fast-learner with solid intellectual and analytical mindset among her colleagues。
   一句吹捧的话,别说得太繁复,否则会有反效果。

2011-03-17

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    After many long hours of hard-work, not only did she prove to be successful in the project, but she also established her position in the company as a quick learner and as an individual with a sound theoretical background。
    Hence she has won appreciation of her colleagues。 。

2011-03-17

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    可以改成:After many long hours of hard-work, not only did she prove to be successful in the project, but she also established her position in the company as a quick learner and as an individual with a sound theoretical background, which has helped her win appreciation from her colleagues。
     。

2011-03-17

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And has got a good job!!!

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